tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353916407664094064.post292233871205159699..comments2023-08-10T13:22:20.472+01:00Comments on BharaSamy's Creative Development: Num Num PrevisBharathi Anthonysamyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11156245561546751313noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2353916407664094064.post-91697172992313439182013-04-15T14:57:25.276+01:002013-04-15T14:57:25.276+01:00Hey Bo,
Okay - a couple of things to think about;...Hey Bo,<br /><br />Okay - a couple of things to think about;<br /><br />1) spelling! *Preparation* !!!<br />2) I think the various info titles need to be on screen for longer; right now it does feel as if these elements are being snatched away from the viewer just as we we begin to settle in to reading them.<br />3) Num-Num is definitely kept too far away from us. Why not simply include close-up sequences of Num-Num eating, for example - as right now you're not making enough of him and our relationship with him is literally kept at arm's length.<br />3) In terms of all the white space, why not have all the cutting of the carrot and the assembly of the sandwich happen in the space above Num-Num's head - so we can really see these moments; so we see the carrot get diced nice and large? It just seems to me that everything of interest in your world is being dealt with at too far a distance from the viewer.<br />4) Don't put the milk back in the fridge - if it's off, it should be disposed of, but I'm wondering if in your education universe the milk carton should be seen to be recycled too?<br />5) The pig sequence needs to be more dynamic - i.e. closer to the camera and more engaging - again, everything is too far away.<br />6) In terms of backgrounds for your space, I still want to see some alternates, but maybe you could consider something like:<br /><br />http://www.fabricsandpapers.com/up/products/1386850673_l.jpg<br /><br />http://www.selectwallpaper.co.uk/store/images/uploads/A-Rod/Serendipity/SD101122.jpg<br /><br />http://www.wallstickeroutlet.com/Images/COinspired-ND7037-2.jpg<br /><br />http://www.fabricsandpapers.com/up/products/1858710401_l.jpg<br /><br />http://st.houzz.com/simgs/27b10718009832a6_4-1721/contemporary-wallpaper.jpgtutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com