Storyboard: Checking if it works

I created this quick storyboard to check whether the timing was right, and to see whether the scenes would actually 'work' in general, from an overall visual aspect. After reviewing the storyboard, I concluded that in order for the timing to work, it would require the still shots to be filled with many seconds of action. However, after creating this storyboard, a new, more promising story line came to mind, and I will have to create another storyboard for this. So the storyboard in this post, will probably not be my final idea, however, it has allowed me to identify how long some scenes take and definitely has inspired my new idea (which will be in the post above).