These character designs are SOOOOOOOO much more communicative and instantly 'readable' - I really like them :-) So, have you resolved your story idea to your satisfaction?
Hi Phil, thanks, the visit from Colin really helped with the development of my characters and I'm glad you like them. I have decided to take your advice on creating a 1 minute trailer for my CCSI series and this therefore provides a bit more leeway in terms of how the story can be told. I am currently getting shots together and am currently working using the following ideas that have spurred from the 1 minute CSI trailer you advised me to watch:
- establishin shot of areas - - 'punch line do not cross' - dead clown body - what could have caused it - investigating case - (running through doors, microscopes, analysing evidence) - more establishin shots???? - From the creator of... - CCSI!!!!!! - quotes from actos e.g. "we solve crimes most labs render unsolveable " we must work together" flash from clown camera into cut? more scenes of quotes plus interrogation/talking between clowns more establishing quotes more quotes or narrative (with UV light etc techniques used in background) Introduce actors/actresses with maybe clown saying their famous quote etc
Evening Bharathi,
ReplyDeleteThese character designs are SOOOOOOOO much more communicative and instantly 'readable' - I really like them :-) So, have you resolved your story idea to your satisfaction?
Hi Phil, thanks, the visit from Colin really helped with the development of my characters and I'm glad you like them. I have decided to take your advice on creating a 1 minute trailer for my CCSI series and this therefore provides a bit more leeway in terms of how the story can be told. I am currently getting shots together and am currently working using the following ideas that have spurred from the 1 minute CSI trailer you advised me to watch:
ReplyDelete- establishin shot of areas -
- 'punch line do not cross'
- dead clown body
- what could have caused it
- investigating case
- (running through doors, microscopes, analysing evidence)
- more establishin shots????
- From the creator of...
- CCSI!!!!!!
- quotes from actos e.g. "we solve crimes most labs render unsolveable
" we must work together"
flash from clown camera into cut?
more scenes of quotes plus interrogation/talking between clowns
more establishing quotes
more quotes or narrative (with UV light etc techniques used in background)
Introduce actors/actresses with maybe clown saying their famous quote etc
"punchline - do not cross" - another flash of punning genuis, Bharathi!
ReplyDeleteI believe the phrase is 'LOL'?