On the left is her first attempt at character designing her old man character - on the right her latest - she's using silhouettes to really 'see' if the character is readable - I suggest you do the same - as her first attempt shows, the shape is too generic and 'spongey' - I think your two thinner characters lack real distinction in this sense - refine them, refine them again and so on...
Hi Bharathi,
ReplyDeleteTake a look at this post from third year Heather's blog
http://heather-young-final-major-project.blogspot.com/2010/02/evolution-of-bert-and-his-home.html
On the left is her first attempt at character designing her old man character - on the right her latest - she's using silhouettes to really 'see' if the character is readable - I suggest you do the same - as her first attempt shows, the shape is too generic and 'spongey' - I think your two thinner characters lack real distinction in this sense - refine them, refine them again and so on...