I decided to leave the suspenseful walking on Mars music for later, it's kinda doing my head in. Thanks alot for the comments Simon, I'm basically using wht advice you've given to change the music, also if anyone could even say what they want a certain piece to sound 'like' e.g. the sound in a video off of Youtube, I can try do it in a similar style.
I intended this piece of Music to be for when the Spacecraft lands on Mars. Please let me know of any changes to be made.
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